一. 結搆分析
In contemporary society, there is a growing tendency that people are less and less concerned about others business(社會現象引入), which has aroused deeply social concern. Therefore, when it comes to the issue whether it becomes less likely for youngsters today to help others than their counterparts in the past(轉述題目), people varying in personalities and ages view the same issue from different angles. However, as far as I am concerned, young people today are less likely to help others than the young were in the past, due to the limited spare time they possessed and the fierce competition they are involved in(主題句：個人立場+概括論証段分論點).
開頭段結搆分析：
第一句，筆者描述一種與題目相關的社會現象，將其作為揹景。第二句，通過雙方在題目上的爭議，引出題目。第三句，提出自己的觀點，並概括兩條理由。
To begin with, there is no denying that the less free time owned by the young people will reduce the likelihood that they help others, which particularly applies to the students in school(段首句：聯係分論點1和立場). As we know, the increasingly heavy study burden has dramatically decreased the leisure time of students(解釋句：解釋分論點如何支持立場). According to a survey conducted by Education Ministry of China, the time students spent on learning in 2014 was more than 8 hours per day, while this figure in 1994 was only 6 hours every day. The great difference in the two figures clearly demonstrate that student’s study time has increased a lot, which in turn decreased their free time. And less free time means that students have less chances to provide help to others.(論証句：通過數据段內對比). Therefore, the decrease in the free time of young people has made it less possible to help others(總結句：轉述段首句).
論証段結搆分析一：
第一句，重述分論點一(時間少)和主論點。第二句，進一步解釋分論點與主論點的關係。第三句到最後是數据類例証法，來証明時間少是如何讓年輕人不可能幫助別人。
Furthermore, the more fierce competition nowadays is another factor which makes young people less likely to help others(段首句：聯係分論點2和立場). One defining character of people is the degree to which they tend to care more about their own interests in a competition(解釋句：解釋分論點如何支持立場). Job hunting is a good case in point. Just imagine that there are 10 candidates competing for one position, which means that the winner has to outcompete the others. Obviously, each candidate would regard others as his enemies instead of friends, thus providing no help for the other one. However, in the past, the competition was not so fierce as it is today. As a result, the youngsters treated others more friendly (論証句：例子/數据/說理). Thus, helping others is becoming less and less possible for young people today because of the more competitive environment.(總結句)
論証段結搆分析二：
第一句：重述分論點二(競爭激烈)和主論點。第二句，解釋競爭激烈如何導緻幫助別人可能性減小。第三句到最後，用求職的例子進行古今對比，來証明分論點。
Judging from what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that young people today are less likely to assist others than they were in the past, on account of the limited leisure time they owned and the fierce competition they are involved(結尾段：重申主題 + 總結論据)
結尾段結搆分析：
一句話重申主觀點，總結兩個分論點。
總體結搆總結如下：
第一段揹景 +爭論+個人觀點總
第二段分論點 1 + 解釋句+例証 1 分
第三段分論點 2 + 解釋句+例証 2
第四段重申主論點+總結分論點總
